January 17, 2018

Must fix Chapter Two in THE RELUCTANT DEBUTANTE. Etienne’s description of rolling toward the review stand, it doesn’t make sense. Needs a good bit of work. May add two or three paragraphs at that point. Need to also in cooperate more fireworks to get horses started again. Need to feel Etienne’s fear.

Lily’s Lagniappe: Well today is a SNOW DAY. Yard is covered in snow and snowed from about 4:00 AM till about noon then around 2:30 it started again. Please STOP!!!!

Lily

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